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Post by Obscure Stranger on Oct 24, 2008 12:22:32 GMT -5
((So sorry, changed it. I was thinking about the other one when i was writing for this one.... hehe.))
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Post by K on Oct 25, 2008 18:06:05 GMT -5
((*Feels rejected*))
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Post by Obscure Stranger on Oct 27, 2008 16:48:37 GMT -5
((GAH NOO!!!!! im so sorry anime tears))
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Post by K on Oct 28, 2008 0:51:12 GMT -5
((Not you. lol. annime tears. splooshing out all over the place like water hoses. anyways... you responded. kayla did not.))
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Post by Obscure Stranger on Oct 29, 2008 13:29:34 GMT -5
((oh...hehe. gomenasai.))
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Post by Shu'al Raethir on Oct 29, 2008 23:30:13 GMT -5
((Yea, sure, continue it. Sorry it took so long to get back to you. Wasn't sure if I wanted to go sci-fi fantasy or not. But go, full speed ahead, avanti avanti.))
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Post by K on Oct 30, 2008 0:35:33 GMT -5
((good thing he asked then if you weren't sure. it would propably be a good idea to describe how your charatcers react. I mean the was just a eclipse/earthquake. those tend to be creepy. Now you get to learn some of Kale's past.))
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Post by K on Oct 30, 2008 0:47:14 GMT -5
"Is everyone alright?" Kale said in a confident voice. Sure he was still shy but he remembered how to ignore it. Kale tried to stand again, slowly. his head throbbed with each pulse of blood. He succeeded in standing, The gift and the mesage was back in his mind again, but he still had yet to access either. Kale knew what he had to do, what was being asked of him but he was unsure as to why. how could one fox have any help in saving the Related Lands? He remembered when the sun had marked him and he knew of what he was asked to do but he didn't know how. The first couple times was easy. He didn't even work hard to save them. The it just got harder and harder until he couldn't cope. He was attacked visiously. He escaped into a land, the search was for were he was most likely to recover. He lost his memory but know he had it back again. He lost a land. They were all dead now. But here it was going to be bad. The sun warned him and the land shook, omens of the attack at that would occur. It was happening already. He could feel it. Would the others be able to feel it? Some could, but some could not. To him it felt like the sun had gone cold and the world was blurry. "Look, Chihir. We have a serious problem. We are in danger and we need to get out of here right now. They are coming." The dark ones would be coming specifically for him. They targeted in on him in ways he didn't even understand. Kale yipped. They were already here. Two of them, taking the form of oily shadowy black foxes though to those without the sight they would look like black balls of shadows. "They are already here! run and I will take care of them." But how would he find the others again? "Wait." Kaye ran over to Chihir and put his nose right under Chihir's ear, a spark transferred from Kale to Chihir. Now Kale would be able to find him, Chihir would also be given the sight. "Go, stick together but hurry! Yuki, you should go with them." Kale turned around to face his enemies. One opened it's mouth and howled in an almost wolfish way. Strands of the dark slime connected the Shadow's bottom jaw to it's upper jaw, a strand flew off hitting the ground in a sickening wet slap. Kale bristled and tried to keep his eyes on both as they slowly circled in opposite directions. Kale backed up trying to keep his eyes on both but they passed out of his vision. The moment he couldn't keep his eyes on both they attacked in unison. Kale sensed them and leaped forward so and they missed. Kale quickly turned and leaped to the left Shadow, fangs bared and brighter than what they should have been in the light. He got his teeth around the startled Shadow's neck and bit as hard as he could, ignoring the horrid slime in his mouth and the Shadow disintigrated. The shadow on the right tackled him. Kale was on the ground and the shadow swiped at his face, claw extending like a cats but much further. As the claws got closer a thin bubble of ethereal light glowed into existance around Kale slowing the claws considerably. Kale was left with two bleeding lines across his muzzle.
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Post by Obscure Stranger on Nov 6, 2008 8:19:21 GMT -5
Yuki whimpered quietly, crouching down on the ground, she had no idea what was going on. Slowly she backed away from the rest of the group, carefully so not as to make any noise. She was about to turn and run into the forest when a twig snapped under her foot. Yuki paused for just a second, glancing behind her at Kale, before running into the bush to hide.
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